Please give yourself no more than 45 minutes to write your essay, and publish it on your blog by noon on Friday, March 27.
Since I want to make sure we are getting specific feedback and learning from each other, without mucking up your blogs with teacher-y comments, I'm thinking about a few ways to do this:
- I can muck up your blogs with teacher-y comments
- You can email me and I can reply with specific comments
- You can copy/paste your essay into a Google doc, which I can edit (and also use kaizena to provide voice feedback)
- We can discuss each other's work in an online meeting on Friday at 2:00 (this will be different than our noon meeting, which is starting to look more like a book club :)
Here is the prompt (I picked one from the year I graduated high school):
Pretend to contribute to a magazine or newspaper; write an article describing a place you know well that might be of interest to readers. Define the significance, and use descriptive detail to make attitude clear.
I once wrote an essay about my childhood backyard-- I'll see if I can dig that up to share. If I can't find it, I'll write something new for the occasion.
Onward!
I think that it'd be better if you read the essay on our blogs and jsut comment on what we can improve on.
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